Gedichte

[Gast]

Flying with love

Everybody is looking for someone
Someone who makes you happy
You can find this one in strangest countries
Countries you never knewn before

Some find this in the neighborhood
Some at the place they work
Who can deny this special wish
To find someone like this
Who makes you flying with love

Some find this just for a little moment
Some for the rest of their life
You can find this in the endless heaven
In stars, sun and moon light
You find this one in the deepest friendship
This one, who dies for you tonight
And you know what I mean
When I say, I�ve found this special one
Who makes me flying with love

Nothing is impossible
When you�re in love
You can climb on every tree
And when you love
Never let it go
ââ?¬Ë?Cause it makes you happy

Well for me is it every day we grow together
To see the mystical moonlight in your faces
To know that you really love me
In every situation, in every place

All the love that you only me shows
All the love that makes you mine
We can fly without wings
ââ?¬Ë?Cause we are flying with love
Yeah we are flying with love

And with your love my life begins
Without it, it will end
We are flying with love

With all the love we give
We are flying with love

(wer Rechtschreibfeher und Grammatikfehler findet, darf sie behalten    )

[Gast]

etwas anspruchsvolles wie ein gedicht in einer fremden sprache zu schreiben finde ich schomal mutig!

allerdings würde es mich schon interessieren warum du dir grade bei so etwas schwierigem wie einem gedicht ,indem es ja besoders um die sprache geht, so eine schwierige aufgabe stellst und dies nicht in deine muttersprache machst?

[Gast]

weil es eigentlich ein Lied darstellen sollte, das ich für meine erste große Geschichte geschrieben habe. Die Story spielt in den USA, ergo die Band singt Englisch und so musste ich mir englische Texte abmühen.
Außerdem kann ich keine deutschen Gedichte schreiben, ich finde unsere Sprache zu unromantisch. DAnn würde ich es eher in Spanisch versuchen

[Gast]

nice.....

[Nico]

A hate of love

Love and all those fucking stuff
Are nothing more than a stupid reaction
That run into your brain
And the feeling of love is nothing more
Than opium in your veins
Takes away your freedom
I�ve give my heart to you
And all you have to do
Is breaking it in two
Lonely pieces of despair

Love and all those fucking stuff
Bring you just problems
Relationships are just shelter
For poor stupid romantics
Who wanna have a broken heart
Who wanna have a cry heart

You�ve taken my light away
You�ve put rocks on my way
And have blamed me down for my way
To love you

Love will never be something good for me
A heart will never get repair
What�s down, stay down you�ll see
I�ll never go back to the place where
I see you the first time

Love and all those fucking stuff
Are nothing more than stupid reactions
That run into your brain
And the old feeling of love
Is nothing more than scorn
In your eyes
In your eyes