If you could only see (Song)

[Skippy]

If you could only see
The way he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Why I give my life in his hands
If you could only see
How he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Maybe you would understand

He’s always there for me
He’s always taking care of me
No matter what I do
He’ll have an eye on me
He always feels when I’m blue
And then he always tries
Everything to cheer me up
It’s him who lights up
My entire life and makes me
Happy with simply a smile

If you could only see
The way he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Why I give my life in his hands
If you could only see
How he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Maybe you would understand

He’s like an guardian angel
Here down earth by my side
He’s like an guardian angel
When he’s watching me
And as soon as I need him
He’s right here by my side
Without that I’ve to call him
Without I’ve to call him
He simply knows I need him
He’s simply there when
I need him and stays with me
As long as I need him

If you could only see
The way he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Why I give my life in his hands
If you could only see
How he treats me
Then maybe you’d understand
Maybe you would understand

If you could only see
Then you would maybe
Know what he means to me
If you could only see
How he treats me
Then you would know
Why he means that much
To me and you would know
That he’s everything for me

[Nordlicht]

Du hast ein paar kleinere sprachliche Fehler drin; ansonsten finde ich es etwas zu "plueschig" (ja ich weiss, erst mecker ich, das so viel negatives in den Beitraegen ist, dann mag ich's andersrum auch nicht...drum haben sie mich in den Wald verbannt). Etwas Gegensatz, vielleicht nach dem Motto "he was always there when none of you could care' oder so was waer vielleicht gut...obwohl bei einem Lied kommt es vielleicht eh nicht so drauf an...

[Skippy]

Plüschig?    Das hört sich so süß an, ich glaub, das bin ich gerne  
Ja, die grammatikalischen Freiheiten sind bei Liedern größer (sind Lieder nicht geil? *g*) und man muss KEIN Komma setzen *rofl*
...wobei...hey, das ist nicht plüschig, das ist real *g* Das war wirklich so... hihi, eine plüschige Freundschaft...plüschig
...sorry, ich muss einen Clown gefrühstückt haben, aber ich könnte ewig weiterlachen...finde das plüschig einfach zu süß      
...und so wie man in Deutschland dunkel schreibt, in Kanada über Wälder, so schreibt man im australischen Outback plüschig...wir sollten das als offizeille Genres angeben      

[Nordlicht]