t rip

[Stimmen]

t rip

If they were close and talked a lot
he would have known about that trip.
He could have asked: “hey so whats it“
and she would tell she likes to quit.

“To quit his heart“, he may have asked
To leave the cold would she have thought
but would have never dared to tell,
“coz he had loved to live above ‘em all.“

[firstoffertio]

Den Titel habe ich noch nicht verstanden.

Im Text scheint mir was mit den Zeiten nicht recht zu stimmen. Mal ein Versuch, der mir mehr einleuchten wuerde:

t rip

 If they'd been close and talked a lot
 he would have known about that trip.
 He could have asked: “hey so what's it“
and she'd have told she likes to quit.

“To quit his heart“, he may have asked (AUF WEN BEZIEHT SICH HIS? MY?)
 To leave the cold she would have thought
 but would have never dared to tell,
“coz he had loved to live above ‘em all.“ (Diese Zeile verstehe ich nicht.Z.B. wer sind 'em??)